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douse me in
your gasoline love
and drench me in
your kerosene kisses

[it's okay. i
like the smell
and the taste.]

but i didn't like
the taste you left
in my mouth
when you walked away
without a smile

and flick your
still-lit-cigarette-butt
looks at me
and light me with the spark
of your eyes that
i used-to-still love [you]

[it's okay. the burns
don't burn as much as
missing you does.]

but i didn't count on
forest-fires of regret
and brush-fires
of wish-i-could-take-it-backs

and watch me burn
for you with a different
fire than i used
to burn with
[let's just say
passion and hurt
are two different kinds
of third-degrees]
©2009 ~Squirrel-23
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Author's Comments

11:45 pm 4/18/09

not to anyone specific.
just was finally able to write.

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:iconsphipony:
lol what's with the profanity?

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Thank you for commenting on the piece.

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:iconx-silentscreams-x:
great work keeping your consistency and development without losing the flow.

[let's just say
passion and hurt
are two different kinds
of third-degrees]


absolutely love those lines.

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We speak in riddles
Expecting the world
To listen between the lines
:iconsphipony:
Just wondering if there was any particular reason you wrote "...fuck..." in the description.

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Well, I'm just saying you could comment on the piece rather than the artist's comment.

I put "... fuck.." because it was all I could think of at the moment. I was amazingly tired.

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:iconsquirrel-23:
Thank youu. ^__^'

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Thank you so much. <345

I was proud of myself for this one. :]
Yet, the one I'm proud of, is the one with least attention paid.

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:iconx-silentscreams-x:
Very welcome darling.

It does seem to go that way quite often, doesn't it? I notice the same about the few pieces of mine that I love. But, the way I see it, it's their loss, because I do love this piece and you deserve to be proud of it :).

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Expecting the world
To listen between the lines

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